Perceptive Editing for
Heartfelt Fiction
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Fiction can be messy. We pour our hearts into plots and characters without knowing, exactly, where our hearts are taking us. When we feel trapped in stubborn plot holes, chaotic climaxes, or I-can’t-quite-tell-why-this-feels-so-slow doldrums, we often wonder if we will ever reach what we’re longing for.
But we can reach it. With the help of an editor’s perceptive eye and experienced hand, we can finally find the heart of our story, waiting to emerge, waiting to shine.
Welcome
My name is Laura Baumgarten, and I am a developmental editor who greets each story with the awareness of a highly-sensitive mind and the empathy of someone who has had a brush or two with trauma. My specialty is helping the heart of your story shine by aligning the foundations of your novel into the rich, resonant story you have been waiting to tell.
How Developmental Editing Unlocks Your Story
Developmental editing deals with the the bones of your novel—plot, character, and theme. I offer two developmental services: a full developmental edit, and the more concise editorial assessment. Both of these will give you a deep dive into the foundations of your novel, helping you to
- level-up your plot so it enchants the reader with perfect tension and pacing,
- clarify character arcs so they naturally fuel both plot and theme,
- and make your theme accessible, authentic, and empowering for your intended audience.
With either of my services, you will receive written guidance, a one-on-one video consultation, and a visual book map tailored to the needs of your novel. I also now offer edits for outlines. This is a great way to get feedback on your plot and character arcs before you start drafting.
Whatever stage of writing you are in, I cannot wait to help you unveil the story you’ve been longing for!
What My Clients Are Saying
Laura is an insightful editor who . . . [guides] you through the revision process with nourishing and empathetic notes and advice. She offers the invaluable balance of capable and clear feedback with a kind and understanding approach—I’m so grateful for her thorough and thoughtful edit letters, and I’m sure you will be, too.
–Kaela Rivera, author of the award-winning
Cece Rios and the Desert of Souls
“Laura helps stories and authors swell with the kind of excitement that comes when you like what you did but you’re even more excited about what you’re going to do.“
–Cara
“Laura is a phenomenal editor who opened a new world of writing to me with her services. She critiqued my writing in a way no one had ever done before. . . . Her feedback has given me the enthusiasm for writing I lost back.”
–Solange
“Laura’s edit absolutely blew me away. Her intelligent and thorough insights helped me to tighten my characters, plot, and arcs on miro and marco levels. She absolutely caught the voice and vibe of my story. She not only found precise, actionable ways to improve the manuscript, but she provided suggestions to guide the process which were consistent with the heart of my story. . . . Her organization and the way she analyzed the story’s structure was next-level. I can’t wait to have her work on my next manuscript and wholeheartedly recommend her services.”
–Taryn
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